The essay has stated reasons why the SRM should not be the only method in fighting climate change but it did not mention the advantages of other method compared to SRM. Focusing on the disadvantages and problem of SRM will not convinced the public from choosing other method if they do not know their advantages and benefits.
The essay thesis was not clear. I did not know wat to expect from the rest of the essay. Paragrapgh 7 did not start with a convicing argument as you started with a favourable fact about SRM. This will result in harder to convince the people about the argument.
There are also some grammatical mistake that you have made.
Thursday, April 1, 2010
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