Thursday, February 25, 2010

Peer Review

The essay that you had written was well organised and answered to the question straight on. There is an area you have mention in your thesis that you did not elaborate,which is the social commitment on both developing and developed countries. You essay is well focus on political and economics commitment and you have show enough evidence that tackling climate change is a global effort. You also mention about the “some form of compensation must be made to developing countries as some of its climate problems are caused by developed countries”,but no examples of compensation is mention in your essay. As for your in-text citation, you did not use the appropriate APA style that was required. Other than this small issues, your essay was well written.