Thursday, February 25, 2010
Peer Review
The essay that you had written was well organised and answered to the question straight on. There is an area you have mention in your thesis that you did not elaborate,which is the social commitment on both developing and developed countries. You essay is well focus on political and economics commitment and you have show enough evidence that tackling climate change is a global effort. You also mention about the “some form of compensation must be made to developing countries as some of its climate problems are caused by developed countries”,but no examples of compensation is mention in your essay. As for your in-text citation, you did not use the appropriate APA style that was required. Other than this small issues, your essay was well written.
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Thank you Effendi for your valuable feedback. Actually, I did mention about the social commitment, it is the combination social and political commitment where developed countries should monitor how developing countries in spending fund provided to them. As for the part that lacks the example of compensation, it was after reading that statement again, I did realise its a sweeping statement (even though we all know that developed countries are the ones contributing to the large amount of Climate Change). I appreciate your comment on that and I will add in further supporting example in my final draft
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