Blog 5 - Peer Review on WA2

The essay has stated reasons why the SRM should not be the only method in fighting climate change but it did not mention the advantages of other method compared to SRM. Focusing on the disadvantages and problem of SRM will not convinced the public from choosing other method if they do not know their advantages and benefits.

The essay thesis was not clear. I did not know wat to expect from the rest of the essay. Paragrapgh 7 did not start with a convicing argument as you started with a favourable fact about SRM. This will result in harder to convince the people about the argument.

There are also some grammatical mistake that you have made.

Blog 4 - Summary article 3

Leading the world in fighting the climate change would need someone with exceptional skills. These skills can vary from personal skills, political and social skills. A person that is dedicated and knowledgeable on the topic of interest is needed to bring the whole world to an agreement in fighting climate change. Negotiation, flexibility and commanding skill is also required to tackle other parties that have a different views or having doubts with the proposed ideas. With this skills, the person in-charge able to consult different parties about their concerns and he able to make a wise decision on fighting climate change. A sense of humour is also needed to make the meeting more interactive rather than a one way communication. Being trustworthy and committed, shows to the different parties that this person able to take responsibility in his work and he able to finish his job effectively. Without these skills, the meeting to fight the global climate change will always be a failure.

Peer Review

The essay that you had written was well organised and answered to the question straight on. There is an area you have mention in your thesis that you did not elaborate,which is the social commitment on both developing and developed countries. You essay is well focus on political and economics commitment and you have show enough evidence that tackling climate change is a global effort. You also mention about the “some form of compensation must be made to developing countries as some of its climate problems are caused by developed countries”,but no examples of compensation is mention in your essay. As for your in-text citation, you did not use the appropriate APA style that was required. Other than this small issues, your essay was well written.

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